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First Pages / Brand, website & e-commerce

A personal story.
A clearer path to purchase.

Designing a welcoming website for personalized children’s books, from the first glimpse of a story to the details that make it theirs.

Brendan McNamara · Founder & designer · 2026
Visual direction · Information architecture · Content design · WordPress / WooCommerce · AI-assisted workflow

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First Pages / A connected website experience
First Pages homepage page layout
HomepageDiscover
First Pages about page layout
AboutConnect
First Pages testimonials page layout
TestimonialsBuild confidence
First Pages checkout page layout
CheckoutPersonalize & order
Four page studies, from discovery to checkout. Select a preview to see the complete layout.

01 / The challenge

Make a custom purchase feel approachable.

Customers need to understand the book, personalization process, and cost before committing to a custom gift.

I shaped the visual direction, page structure, instructional copy, and WordPress / WooCommerce implementation to connect the appeal of a personal story with a clear route to ordering.

02 / Viewing structure

Inspiration first. Details when they matter.

Introduce the product, show examples, and explain the process before asking customers to personalize and pay.

  1. 01DiscoverUnderstand the personalized-book idea.
  2. 02ExploreSee examples and how it works.
  3. 03PersonalizeShare story and character details.
  4. 04Review & payCheck the order and delivery cost.
  5. 05Next stepsUnderstand what follows the order.

Journey stages, not five separate checkout screens.

Wireframes / Page structure

From discovery to a personal order.

Four page studies map the experience across product discovery, the founder’s story, customer feedback, and checkout. Together, they show how content, navigation, and calls to action connect the journey.

Scroll within each preview to explore the full page, or open the full-size image. These layout studies include image and testimonial placeholders.

01 / Homepage

Discover the product

First Pages homepage page wireframe and layout study

Introduces the personalized-book offer, explains the process, and leads visitors toward starting a book.

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02 / About

Connect the product to its founder

First Pages about page wireframe and layout study

Organizes the brand story, founder introduction, and reasons to choose a personalized keepsake.

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03 / Testimonials

Plan space for customer stories

First Pages testimonials page wireframe and layout study

Shows the intended placement of future customer feedback. The quotation cards are draft placeholders, not published reviews.

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04 / Checkout

Bring the order into one view

First Pages checkout page wireframe and layout study

Groups customer details, story notes, optional photos, and the order summary in a single proposed checkout layout.

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03 / Visual direction

Let the book explain the promise.

Book imagery makes an unfamiliar custom product tangible. Short headings, generous spacing, and a consistent primary action keep the surrounding interface calm, giving the illustrations room to carry the personality.

First Pages story artwork shown in the website’s book preview section
Story imagery supports product exploration.
Personal dedication page from a First Pages book
Personal details reinforce the keepsake aspect.

04 / Feedback & iteration

Turn hesitation into clear design priorities.

Customer comments and a VentAiLabs review pointed to three priorities: make the offer clear, bring the cost forward, and simplify the next step.

01 / Product clarity

Show what they receive.

Lead with a direct product description, book previews, and a short explanation of personalization.

02 / Cost visibility

Bring the price forward.

Keep price and production timing near the primary action. Show shipping and applicable tax before payment.

03 / A clear next step

Start your order.

Use a direct action label and reduce repeated discount messaging. Keep coupon entry secondary.

“A few things I’d look at: show the full total (book price plus shipping/tax) before the final button. People bail when the number changes late. Keep the promo code field collapsed or low key, it makes full price buyers hunt for discounts. And show the book title and format right next to the pay button so there’s no doubt what they’re buying. One page, few fields, one clear button.”

VentAiLabs review · October 14, 2026

Review context: Mac desktop · VentAiLabs feedback · October 14, 2026

Issue identified: The reviewer recommended clearer final costs, quieter promo-code entry, and the book title and format beside payment.

Design response: Revised desktop captures group the order summary with payment. The latest checkout wireframe brings personalization and the order summary into one layout.

Retest: Pending. Next, check whether a customer can find the story input, identify the final total, and reach payment without help. This feedback is a qualitative review; task completion and conversion improvements have not been measured.

05 / Ordering experience

Three understandable tasks.

The checkout direction connects personalization with the final purchase. The uploaded page study above shows the proposed structure.

01 / Story details

Give people a starting point.

Prompt for the child’s name, interests, and story idea. The existing implementation collects these details through order notes.

02 / Optional photos

Explain the upload.

State accepted formats and limits beside the upload, and ask customers to identify who is pictured.

03 / Review & pay

Keep the order in view.

Group the book, quantity, delivery, and total near payment, with an easy route to correct details.

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Mobile checkout / UX concept

Personalize first. Review before ordering.

A proposed mobile flow pairs guided story details and optional photos with an editable review, visible pricing, and a clear next action.

Annotated First Pages mobile checkout concept: personalization fields and optional photo upload beside an order review with book preview, editable details, estimated total, and production timing
Mobile design concept with illustrative customer details. The annotations explain progress, personalization, and cost visibility. This is a proposed interface, not a capture of a completed order or a customer test. View full-size concept ↗

Checkout / Before & after

Keep related decisions together.

The revised desktop capture brings payment fields beneath the selected method and places the order summary beside customer details.

Before / Payment detail

Earlier First Pages checkout with widely separated card selection and payment fields
The earlier payment detail separates the selected card option from its inputs and uses substantial vertical space for the order totals. Click to enlarge.

After / Revised desktop checkout

Revised First Pages checkout with customer details beside order summary and grouped payment fields
The revised desktop capture groups card inputs beneath the selected method and places the order summary beside customer details. The applied discount appears in the cost breakdown. Click to enlarge.

Historical captures from October 12, 2026 show different cart states and an earlier offer. Compare grouping rather than totals. The newer checkout study above shows $29.99 with free U.S. shipping.

Supporting review: personalization and mobile assistance

Personalization / Remaining refinement

First Pages story notes and optional photo upload below the checkout details panel
The upload states its optional status, image count, and size limit. Generic delivery-note wording and the upload’s position relative to Place order remain refinement opportunities. Click to enlarge.

Earlier mobile capture / Issue identified

Earlier mobile homepage with broken headline wrapping and Shrey prompt overlapping text
The earlier mobile capture documents mid-word headline wrapping and a concierge prompt overlapping the hero copy. The proposed response is responsive typography and a compact, dismissible assistance launcher; no corrected mobile capture is shown here. Click to enlarge.

Group related fields.

Keep payment inputs close to the selected method so the required action is clear.

Keep costs visible.

Place the book, quantity, and full total near the purchase decision.

Put help where it matters.

Use short personalization prompts beside the input, with optional detail available on demand.

Next checks: mobile layout, upload visibility before submission, quantity editing, and preservation of story details. Screenshots document appearance; successful payment and accessibility have not been verified here.

06 / AI-agent experience design

A book concierge with a defined role.

Shrey’s public greeting introduces help with books, photos, and ordering. The proposed conversation flow keeps answers short, grounded in store information, and connected to the relevant next step.

SHREY / CONVERSATION STRUCTUREPROPOSED AGENT BEHAVIOR
01 / IDENTIFY INTENT

Is the customer exploring a gift, asking about photos, or trying to place an order?

02 / CLARIFY

Ask one focused question only when it is needed. Avoid repeating information already supplied.

03 / GUIDE

Give a short answer grounded in store information, with a relevant link or next step.

04 / HAND BACK CONTROL

Return to the order form, or offer human help if the answer cannot be verified.

CUSTOMERDo I need to upload a photo?
SHREY · SAMPLE RESPONSEPhotos are optional. If you add them, use up to five JPG, PNG, or WebP images under 10 MB each, and identify who is pictured in your order notes.
CONTEXTUAL NEXT STEPContinue to story details →
Conversation-design example, not a recorded customer exchange. The concierge’s public greeting is live; the routing, contextual actions, and fallback behavior illustrated here are proposed and require implementation and testing.

The design brief keeps payment and photo uploads in their designated forms, offers human support when an answer is uncertain, and lets customers continue without chat.

AI in the design workflow

ChatGPT supported structure, copy, and HTML/CSS exploration. Gemini and Gamma formed part of the exploratory toolkit. I selected and reviewed the direction, hierarchy, wording, and generated material.

Agent routing, contextual actions, and fallback behavior shown in the diagram are proposals requiring implementation and testing.

07 / Outcome & next steps

A connected foundation for a personal product.

First Pages brings book examples, product guidance, and ordering into a working website, supported by page studies and a documented checkout review.

Next: observe customers placing test orders, address points of hesitation, and measure completion and abandonment. Conversion improvements have not yet been measured.

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